Most of the times it has clothes that cover the floor. Lv 7. Flagstone Cost Per Pallet, My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. Also my bedroom faces east causing it to be cold a lot. Cleanliness, my room is not what you call clean my clothes from school lying on my bed jerseys not been hung up because I'm to lazy, my bed all messed up because I never make it, but some things aren't all bad like the way I have set up stuff that makes it look really cool and neat. In my bed room the layout, cleanliness, colors and accessories are the most important things that makes my bedroom that makes it mine. Very well written i liked the word choices and how you alborated on it, there was nothing that I could find that needed work i would give you a 4+, Very good way of describing room. I have a COD (Call of Duty) BO3 poster a COD 4 Remastered poster and my certificates of every school I ever went to. They are rather a good set and they cost a lot of money. Also when you look down ot my window you can see the workshop and the shed. A midnight black bedside table to go with the other colours in the house and also to go with the short stack that is my other set of drawers that has felt blue and green draws. Antenna Tv Buffalo, My bedroom is facing west and is on the far side of the house. Also my bed is a queen which is always made with colorful sheets on It. It fits my school clothes, jerseys and other stuff. They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. It is dominated by rubbish, food plates, cups and dirty clothes. I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. Pictures and paintings would also make my room have a bit more zest. There are so many little pieces to remember that I dont even know nearly half of them even exist. It has a dark deep blue background with the flowers painted in a yellow so light it is almost white, the brush strokes carefully placed to show the wind gently blowing the flowers. You only had three simple senses that were not very detailed and I think you could have added more detail about the noise and smell and sight in your room. I run to my room, upstairs on the left i jump onto my bed yes schools over I think to myself. No one's room is black and white they all have colours and mine has definitely got a lot of colours. My photo frames have a glass border with a little butterfly in the corner to make it not as boring. The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. My theme, my theme of my room is based on a sporty kind of theme. I think that as soon as I was reading the first paragraph it was full of punctuation's. I give you a 4. Personally . next time leave out the details about the dust! Annies Bedroom I didn't see any spelling mistakes. Some names needed capitals. You have missed out on some things ie. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. I usually put it on my birch table. Excellent punctuation and spelling. But some of the stuff in my room is going to sold so I can make more space. It is the largest bedroom in the house it is rectangular and has a built in wardrobe. Georges Bedroom But good over all, Shadyn this is an accurate explanation of your teenage boy's bedroom. Underneath by clip board I have small shapes of watermelon bunting. On my far side wall I have a bright red clipboard with flowers on it, on the clipboard I have many pictures of my family, friends and me. It has a great layout because of the way that my comfy double bed gets most of the sun.As you open the door to my bedroom a sudden warmth invites you in. I have the white bedside table right next to my bed because well i need something to put my drink on, and I think that's the same for my sister. well done kaden it does sound like your room. Around my room are a lot of decorations like skateboards, medals and paintings. And I don't think you would want to touch anything in my room it would give you an odor you couldn't even imagine. Overall I love my room to pieces because it belongs to me. There are many spaces of my room everything from cloths on the draws and my bed in the corner. James, I liked the way you structured your paragraphs and the whole description came together. Your writing paints a picture in the readers mind and leaves them feeling like they actually just physically walked around it! Needs work on the punctuation. And make sense of your sentences. In the distance you can see the woolshed, it is made out of corrugated iron, like the chook shed it is pretty messy on the inside though. I enter the room and dump my bulky school bags onto the ground. We have a small sister that isnt allowed in but she comes in anyway. I have two massive windows which are connected to a door that leads outside into one of our three gardens. The description of the desk and wardrobe are spot on!! My Bedroom Your punctuation was good. Jamies Bedroom Description. It was a good description of your room I rely could visualized what the room looked like. Use adjectives. So overall your writing is amazing. you have a done good job with your spelling and punctuation. Now I will take your for a tour on what my bedroom looks like. I'm not saying my bedroom is small it's just not big enough for all my bits and bobs. The size of my bedroom is the smallest out of the rest of my families rooms, but I can still fit in everything I need into it. The carpet in my room is the newest and cleanest. . We cannot afford to heat our house in the winter. Furniture is one of the biggest features of the room. I have to share my room with my big brother, Sam. I like the colours, the decorations, the flooring, the view of the farm and most of all my cosy bed. There are no dirty cloths on the floor, no rubbish on the floor. It sounds like the perfect place to go after school or work and feel comfortable and relaxed. Accessories is definitely one of my favorite things to see in my room. I personally love my bedroom. A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. For self fun and study. I like how big my room is because its a good size for me to just lay on the ground and play on my devices or read. Jakes Bedroom Style , layout , accessories and furniture are the 4 best qualities about my bedroom because that's what makes it mine. Even though it's small and crammed together and not that tidy it all adds to the style and the feel of the room. The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. On the very top of my tall draws of my dressers are a couple of drink bottles, along with a cup I got from netball this season. I my room there is lots of colours all around it. My bedroom has the air of a miniature museum; the amount of photographs, posters and ornaments is quite daunting, as though it is difficult to decide what to examine first! E.g pain main, Logan you had lots of spelling mistakes like you said flour instead of floor and 'i's not 'I' \. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of 3+. Having the perfect bedroom isnt that hard as long as you make it yours. It is also nice to curl up with a book or bask in the afternoon sun. Very well written. My room also has a bit of a natural vibe as there are a far few plants around room. why are clocks (The ones u hang on the wall) still important in the digital age? But most of the time, me and Sam are in different moods. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. I like how you used brackets and capital letters to make words stand out, Your Spelling is good Molly. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. My bedroom layout includes two sets of windows, both made with with grey aluminium and double glazed glass. I get a feeling you're into sports and really like cosy spaces. The next thing your eyes are drawn to is the cluttered, varnished oak shelf in the back left corner of my room. The thing i treasure is my lego bin because it contains my cool creations. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. Bent u genteresseerd neem gerust contact met ons op. My carpet has black and brown stripes and is squishy and soft. I think you need to work on use of commas and apostrophes, some of them are not needed. Ano ang pinakamaliit na kontinente sa mundo? 3rd paragraph "one of them are a full size katana" should be I also have a painting of Clifton Beach (where we lived in Australia) that I did with a friend, it is hanging over my bed. Every cloud has a silver lining, as they say. Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, My bedroom is very tidy. I love the way in which you used senses, This is great. I love my room just the way it is, I even love the modern color's. Secondly, the accessories. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. Then you notice the two untidy desks slightly to the right of my dresser. In my room it echos and to counter that I put up a couple posters in my room. I like the layout, colors, furniture and the style it has a red feature wall (my favorite color). 4 out of 5. It's Romeo's line about his inamorata: "Juliet is the sun." I liked the way that you used the senses to give a more detailed effect about your bedroom. It is filled with different kinds of art, photos and bedding. Stinky socks, crumpled papers and forgotten towels. She could have added the fact that we live in a Lockwood home which is why the walls are made of wooden planks. I have a globe lamp on top of my chest of drawers but the bulb in it broke so its all taken apart, sitting next to it is my 3D colosseum puzzle. All my clothes and shoes are hidden away in the wardrobe so you dont have to see them. It also depends of mine and Sams moods. All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. My layout, I think the layout of my room is perfect because my cabin bed, like the top half of of a bunk bed, is at the far end and looking over the entire room, apart from what's underneath it. I am going to take you on a mental journey around my bedroom. The grey carpet is soft and oddly soothing underfoot. On one side is a white metal pole and on the other is a white wooden slab to keep the desk up and stable. 5. Im about to take you on a tour around my room. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. MY BEDROOM! You might walk through all the different scenes of people playing and say, wow, my home has become a playground today!. So try using better descriptive words. Surprisingly the first thing 506 Words 3 Pages Ice-Metaphors In the poem Ice the author uses Metaphors to create a feeling of emptiness to the reader. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. SHADYNS BEDROOM I really love my bedroom, its completely designed by me and thats why I love it. 3+. You also need to double check that your sentences making sense. When I walk into my room all I can smell is dirty sweaty clothes. You have some good simple vocabulary. They can cause any colored food or thing to show really easily. Descriptive writing is one of the essential skills that children will learn in school and progress into life. I am glad you love your bedroom! The dark side. I liked your ideas, you thought of ideas then typed in down on your google doc. It is made of pine so is a rather light golden brown in colour. Which I have owned for a year now but it is really loud. I would say that the smell of my bedroom is like a warm summers day and it looks like a warm summers day too. At the bottom of the bed I have a bright red cover I keep it there just in case there's a cold night so if there is I can pull it over my bed for more warmth. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. Now heres why everything is where it is, so both king single beds are right up against the creamy walls because well I dont really enjoy having my annoying sister in my room but mum says she has to so I tried to keep us as far apart as possible. The bit that gets me, is how can one person be so messy?! The scary closet. Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment. Other times it is messy even though we tidied it that morning. This is the place I go to when I have to go to bed or to just chill. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. I have white walls and chocolate brown curtains. Also there were some little things like having i instead of I that you could of fixed. People say their home is their castle to create the sense that their home is the place where theyre the king. Lastly, my favorite item in my room would be my lovely old fashioned jewelry box. This is such a clear description of your room Mabelle! There's pillows and rugs lying among my room, worn out posters and books stuffed in my wardrobe. Does my room have a theme? I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. The location of my bed is in a usual place, well that's at least what I think, it's in a corner, yeah, my draws seem to be the second weirdest placement they're placed directly beside my bed like, on the edge of my bed, and then there is my bedside table, it's not even a bedside table its a bed end table, now I want to tell you some things that really are in my bedroom, firstly there's a bath, yes a bathtub is in my bedroom you have to a really dumb builder to put the bathtub in a bedroom, secondly a window to nowhere there is a window in my wardrobe, that has just left me speechless. These windows have a beautiful view in spring when all of the flowers have bloomed. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. The room feels incredibly spacious because of the high ceilings, fitted with chandelier-like light fixtures The walls are not just straight and boring as they have little alcoves that are useful for tucking away furniture neatly. Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. This is the end of my description but in the future I would like to either add some more stuff in there which I have been dying to have for ages or have it in a different room. You did'n't go into detail about your furniture we don't know what patterns or colours they are. Youll find that my beds always made in the morning, and the clothes arent all scattered across the floor unlike the rest of my family. For example, a child who loves to be out playing on the streets but needs to be indoors by 5pm might come home and say: Its a prison in here! The colors that are used are light sea blue, grey and black. And now for the couch The one thing I hate about my room and cant get rid of it. Next your eyes will settle upon my short and skinny box shelf that is as black as the night with draws both as blue as the sea and as green as the algae the resides in it. My bed is nearly always made. My bed with its wooden stand is quite tall but I dont mind it that way. Three quarters of my room is engulfed in clothes and mess. My books are bright and colourful so they stand out, all of them are different colours. to the right of that is a small toy box filled to the brim and next to it there is a big wardrobe that I never use. It has gym equipment, sports bags, a comfy queen sized bed and many more. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. Next to them I have tall, white draws bulging with clothes. This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. I don't care what people think about it because its my own space. 4+. Although in the second paragraph you could have stated what you were talking about a bit better. When I left my room I had my pajamas on the floor with my beanbag in the middle of the room. I, myself, like my room a lot, its not perfect but its very me and its filled with things I love like sport and photography. Maybe expand on some of these so we know more detail eg: what type of animals can you hear? The mother has to handle all of these things, and is feeling like shes trying to coordinate a zebra, giraffe, and elephant, to all work in unison! There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . you could add more expression in your writing next time. The duvet is black and white patterned with vibrant orange sheets. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. A good descriptive story. At first I was a little surprised of the state of my bedroom, my wall decorations all still hanging up all except for one little photo. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. I have 3 words to describe my dutches brown, soft, wooden it has five drawers 2 side by side then 3 long ones below each other. Just above my table are shelves were put things like books and trophies. But probably my biggest color is black or white as I have quite a few drawers that are black and white. My grandma gave it to me, she loves tigers. Brown that stands out because of the shine. 10 metaphors to describe a place. One window is high on the wall with a rectangular shape the other window is more centered on the wall and is a square. Maybe next time don't use 'my' too much. I personally like the way my bedroom feels and looks. There are ups and downs but it is where I feel safe and calm. A lumpy duvet lies messily on the thick mattress that cradles me at night. Remington 7600 Thumbhole Stock, On the opposite wall to my bed, lives my sisters king single bed with a black storage stool (that she doesn't use). You've really set the scene, invited us in and shown us how cosy it is in there. It's the worst having such a messy bedroom. By Bridget Smith. The untidiness of my bed is also horrific, just a pile of blankets, sheets and a duvet all scrunched up in the middle of the bed. 3-. I have loads of different accessories in my bedroom. Your mother might say this if they come home and see that youve left all your toys lying out. as your room! You need to think about what home feels like to you. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. Also two comfy blue headphones and it's sound is great as well I have had this for a few months now. Well done though :-). And it sits on the other side of the room! My bed is the main accessory in my room because it is in the center of the room up against my feature wall. As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. Under this window is my computer desk with a small draw and a slot for a keyboard giving a nice place to work. I really like the words you have used to describe your story like Its there to hold previous achievements and precious keepsakes but I really just use it to hold some certificates that cant find in my bookshelf. My duvet is light blue with spots that are light pink, dark pink, turquoise and white.My bed is a king single and I find that it is a very convenient size. Its a big room, but when shared and halved, the stomping grounds are rather small, which also means little mess in little space looks like big mess. Looking at the wall-mounted shelves next to my bed you can see my reading lamp, my phone charger and a few books. It is the most modern part of my entire house because it has recently been renovated from the garage that was never used. The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. But you could be a bit more tidier. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. Its normally just a mucked up pile of sheets and she is always nagging me to make my bed and or clean my room. Or, it might be used to express how dirty the home is. The laws don't apply to my imagination except for the time to clean your room law. But if I could change one thing it would be to have it all to myself, that way I would be able to sleep in on the weekends. This is the exact opposite of the earlier metaphor saying that your home is a workplace. 1. I have a built in wardrobe that has shelves in it where I can store my belongings. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. On my bed is a light purple duvet with a big blanket folded on the end. Many people have bedrooms and many people look at theirs differently but we all have something that makes our own bedrooms ours. Flick Of The Wrist Meaning, Your email address will not be published. 4+, Nice work describing your room. Ruebens bedroom There was a couple of spelling mistakes though. On one side is a three section wardrobe with most of my craft supplies in it. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. As the sun beamed into my bedroom, one of my signs began to glisten and reflect the light that was coming through the window. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. Creamy brown and soft those are just few words I would use to describe my carpet it is great for my hard feet. and there is no conclusion or ending paragraph. I liked the simple ideas of your description as they stuck to what they were made for and didn't go off topic My duchess is across from my bed flat against the left hand wall. This usually means that there is a mess all over the floor. My Home is my Castle. I cant find much bad things about your description writing. Next time you can probably calm down by using the brackets. A metaphor is a word or phrase that is used to make a comparison between two things. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. 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